Looking good so far. The tunic, hat, belt, boots and code cylinders look good from what I can see.
2 things do jump out to me as issues, although my eye isn't as keen for details as some of the veteran Officers here.
First would be the jodhpurs. They do look a little baggy and the shaping of the flares seems too low in my opinion.
Second is the Admiral rank bar. As far as I know Admiral bars can't be worn on a Staff Officer as it is seen exclusively on Line (Naval) Officers. I'm sure someone else will be able to confirm this.
A few HD pictures of front/back/sides would be good for Advisors to look over too. I think with the above 2 issues sorted (and a good press/iron) you should be good to go.
The jodhpurs, as mentioned, could use a little work. Stiffening the flares and adding stirrups would be very beneficial.
For basic approval, you are allowed to wear an Admiral rank bar, so that's ok. If you were interested in going for L2/3, then you'd need to replicate an on-screen officer exactly, and you wouldn't be able to use the Admiral rank bar.
Chargrilled got a reaction from trencher in Trying to get 501st approved